It is seen that population growth has led to an emergence of urban living. Write an essay to discuss the impact of urban living on locals.
Nowadays, apartments are seen everywhere. Tall buildings, crowded streets are becoming the norm. In this essay, I will explore the many impacts of urban living, including its influence on crime rates, living conditions, and health.
First of all, a crowded living space means that crime rates will be higher. Usually, a city does not have a large population. If people do well, people from other places come to live there. There are good people, but there are also bad people, people who have bad intentions and a bad background. Living near these people is dangerous. They are more likely to commit crime, and for example, robbery.
Second of all, a large population means that the houses will become smaller, and the traffic will be busier. It is because small houses allow more people to live in. Reality is, apartment buildings are everywhere nowadays. Also, traffic will be more crowded too. In my hometown, streets are filled with cars all the time, especially during peak hours.
Finally, in some cities, people have to live in areas with a lot of factories. Factories are known to cause lots of pollution, and pollution affects people’s health. Some plants also make loud noises, which can affect people’s lifestyle terribly. For example, the factories in my hometown are very loud. My neighbors told me that they could not speak to each other, could not watch television, and it is a big trouble for them.
In conclusion, urban living brings about negative impacts to people’s lives. It can increase crime rates, make houses smaller, traffic busier, and affect people’s lives with factories. Facing this reality, the authorities should do something to help the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...s are becoming the norm. In this essay, I will explore the many impacts of urban ...
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Message: This word is common for American English. Did you mean 'flat'?
Suggestion: flat
...low more people to live in. Reality is, apartment buildings are everywhere nowadays. Also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12230215827 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50560161218 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593525179856 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7152106362 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.7272727273 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6363636364 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04545454545 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143045768127 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043829598602 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624238359881 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947444188562 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592151977789 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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