There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts — especially at a
great cost in money and jobs — to save endangered animal or plant species.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or
might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The prompts claim that we can usually learn much more from like-minded people whose views contradict our own because disagreement can cause tension, demotivation, and impede learning. The given topic is highly contentious because different people may have disparate positions and opinions on the topic. Some may go for the topic, while others cannot agrue with it at all. I agree with the topic that we can usually learn much more from people whose views we can share that those whose views contradict our own. There are three reasons and examples that supporting my position are presented in the following paragraphs below.
Firstly, A animal and species are the most important things of any countries. An animals help to define the countries, and also the plants is used to make different medicine in that country. For examples, In the Nepal, there is many national parks, where there are live more then 200 animals lives their and also have more than 1000 plant species are their. In addition, more then millions people are came to visit in that national parks also ,which is help in economic development of the country. If the government does not effort that are to protect the endanger animal and plant species, that reduce the economic condition of Nepal. In effect, Society to make extraordinary efforts to save the endanger animal and species.
Furthermore, the world is suffering from different disease like COVID-19, Dengue, Cancer, and so on, a medicine of all of these diseases are found from the plant species. For instance, In the Nepal, there are different " Ayurvedic medicine" which is invented from the plant species. If the people doesn't take effort to save these endanger species, there may be end of Ayurvedic medicine era, and future generation does not have any knowledge of those fields. Consequently, society most save endanger species.
Lastly, most of the people in the stone ages are base on plant species for the medicine, and also scientists generate the medicine on the plants species. Thus, it must be protected.
In sum/conclusion, the reasons and examples presented to support the claim/positions that completely agree with the essay. The topic highlights, there is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts to save endangered species or plant species. The examples of the Nepal endanger plant and animal species, and Nepal "ayurvedic medicine" illustrate to support the given statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, may, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23425692695 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78266742768 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465994962217 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 650.7 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3909410379 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.9 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.85 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217735700541 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081539302734 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869612787238 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130794971501 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729689365412 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.