Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit children as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that the primary role of education is to provide society with a competent workforce rather than value individual satisfaction. While I am in agreement with this idea, I also reckon that educating the young generation for their own sake is of paramount importance.
Undoubtedly, academic institutions have an indispensable role to play in delivering moral lessons and teaching disciplines to students. It is teachers who teach them to differentiate between right and wrong from an early age and turn them into model citizens who are law-abiding. Moreover, equipping young generations with academic knowledge has always been a fundamental role of the education system. They will be exposed to various aspects of life including history, geography, or even economy while sharpening relevant skills acquired from participating in group projects, such as communication, problem-solving, and decision-making skills. With deeper insights into the surrounding world and hands-on experience, it is highly likely that they become more flexible and adaptable to new and complex working environments.
Having said that, personal development should not be overlooked. Apart from providing knowledge, schools should place equal emphasis on cultivating learners’ emotional intelligence and promoting natural abilities. In other words, this is an environment where they learn how to express themselves and establish new social connections. Simultaneously, schools could discover learners’ potential and encourage them to pursue their true passions involving sports or art. In this regard, education helps perfect students by developing their strengths and overcoming their weaknesses.
All things considered, the educational system should be regarded as an institution that is responsible for training ythe oung generation to contribute to the development of the country while fostering their talents, ensuring sustainable progression.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...While I am in agreement with this idea, I also reckon that educating the young ge...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, while, apart from, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96428571429 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30197065464 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692857142857 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2629631236 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.461538462 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0514803457979 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0175199278708 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271461460997 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0289478739893 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198882045876 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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