Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Tourism has become an essential national income for many countries as foreigners tend to spend a great deal of time and money in host societies and thereby stimulate local economy. However, there is a growing debate among people accompanying the booming of tourism, that is, whether it is reasonable for visitors to follow local customs and behaviors or for host countries to embrace different cultures and values. In fact, both these efforts are important in promoting tourism.
With regards to the viewpoint that foreigners need to obey local customs and behaviors, there is a couple of evidence ...
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