The number of telephone call in the UK from 1995 to 2002
The bar chart below shows the overall number of telephone call in the UK during a 7-year period, between 1995 and 2002, and is measured by minutes in million.
Overall, the number of call by the mobile and national and international-fixed line show a gradual increase from 1995 to 2002, while the call from local-fixed line has a curve form during this period.
From the graph, we can see that the number of minutes of telephone call showed a gradual increase from three to ten million minutes between 1995 and 1999 and continued rise up significantly to 40 million minutes, while the call by national and international fixed line-line upward slightly.
A closer look at the data reveal the number of minutes of telephone call by local-fixed line grew up considerably from 70 to 90 million minutes between 1995 and 1998, but after a short peak, the figure fell down in the same stage in 1995.
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the overall number of telephone call in the UK
the overall number of telephone calls in the UK
the number of call by the mobile and national and international-fixed line show a gradual increase from 1995 to 2002, while the call from local-fixed line has a curve form during this period.
the number of calls ... shows a gradual increase from 1995 to 2002, while the calls from local-fixed line have a curve form during this period.
while the call by national and international fixed line-line upward slightly
while the calls ... are upward slightly
A closer look at the data reveal
A closer look ... reveals
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Characters: 722 1000
No. of Different Words: 82 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.534 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.628 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 34 50
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.692 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.423 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4