The number of telephone call in the UK from 1995 to 2002
The bar chart below shows the overall number of telephone call in the UK during a 7-year period, between 1995 and 2002, and is measured by minutes in million.
Overall, the number of call by the mobile and national and international-fixed line show a gradual increase from 1995 to 2002, while the call from local-fixed line has a curve form during this period.
From the graph, we can see that the number of minutes of telephone call showed a gradual increase from three to ten million minutes between 1995 and 1999 and continued rise up significantly to 40 million minutes, while the call by national and international fixed line-line upward slightly.
A closer look at the data reveal the number of minutes of telephone call by local-fixed line grew up considerably from 70 to 90 million minutes between 1995 and 1998, but after a short peak, the figure fell down in the same stage in 1995.
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the overall number of telephone call in the UK
the overall number of telephone calls in the UK
the number of call by the mobile and national and international-fixed line show a gradual increase from 1995 to 2002, while the call from local-fixed line has a curve form during this period.
the number of calls ... shows a gradual increase from 1995 to 2002, while the calls from local-fixed line have a curve form during this period.
while the call by national and international fixed line-line upward slightly
while the calls ... are upward slightly
A closer look at the data reveal
A closer look ... reveals
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 4 10
No. of Words: 156 200
No. of Characters: 722 1000
No. of Different Words: 82 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.534 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.628 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.682 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 49 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 34 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 17 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 39 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.778 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.692 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.423 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4