The diagrams show the development of small fishing village and its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The maps illustrate how a small fishing village and its surrounding area improved to be a big tourist spot over the period from 1974 to 2004.The general overview is that despite of many movements in this area, the old fishing village still stays unchanged.
To specify, in the north hills, in 1974, there were two small villages, which had been expanded to larger villages and tourist shops in 2004. However, a hill farm of sheep and goat and many trees had been removed to give space for this expansion. Moreover, the woodland in the north west hills also had been gone to give place for the const...
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