The diagrams below show the development of a small fishing village and its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrates the transformation of a small fishing village and its suburban area into a modernized and large European resort for tourists.
In 1974, most areas were unspoiled and tourists attractions were mostly unavailable at this time; but after 30 years, there was a profound development in this area. Population had significantly grown from 12,000 to 80,000 in 2004, with more 50,000 beds for tourists. Along the coast, a great deal of hotels were built and beaches were also opened. At the west of the original fishing village, the woodland and olives garden were cut down and then replaced by golf course and farmland, providing fruits and vegetables for hotels.
One interesting development was the construction of a new road from the original village to the East one. Agricultural activities in this East village were no longer available. The West village also underwent several changes to adapt to the increasing needs from tourists. The local council expanded the village area and more tourist shops were established to provide souvenirs for customers.
Overall, a comparison of these two maps reveals that this area experienced a total urbanization from a sprasely populated area to the modern and large tourist resort.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'illustrate'.
Suggestion: illustrate
The diagrams illustrates the transformation of a small fishing v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27135678392 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84557916332 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618090452261 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1133399198 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.9 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190223869722 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793677222879 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947155797731 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15759368191 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106627201273 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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