You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The maps below show the development of a small fishing village and its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
Writing task 1
The maps depict the refurbishments of a small fishing village in 1974 to became an enormous European tourist resort in 2004.
Overall, it is noticeable that the village had developed and changed remarkably in the past few years. Additionally, many developments had been applied and the village in 2004 turned into a crowded and attractive resort.
Looking at the two maps, it is evident that the characteristic which changed the most was the woodland. It had been knocked down and instead, a golf course was bulit right at its place in 2004. Furthermore, in the centre of the village, the olives field and the area for sheep and goats had been renovated and became a modern farmland in 2004, provided fruit and vegetables for the nearby hotels which had just appeared at the coastal area served for tourists. In the north-west, the village had also been expanded and added more shops. Last but not least, the new road for transportation had been developed connected the homes of locals to another village.
Howerver, we can easily realise that there were also some features which remain stable, for instance the fishing village. Those features created the traditional custome for the resort and made the resort attracted more tourists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04368932039 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67218349201 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587378640777 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0840293906 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.9 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136809999554 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620628625009 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576496937172 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112159489833 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614028451191 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.