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You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which
would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
Choosing between buying a business and a house is a decision one needs to take with due diligence. It requires proper understanding of one's ability, immediate needs, and future needs as well. The question is, between a house and a business, which would I buy, given the required funds? Certainly, I would buy a business.
First, when I buy a business, I will be able to make more money from the business and buy a house later. During my childhood days, I used to help my mum in her business. Through that process, I learnt how to market products to customers and convince them to buy the product I...
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