Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Bieng famous itself is a great pride for every individual. Presently, it is claimed that celebrities are owing prevalence on account of their prosperity and innovative fads instead of their accomplishments. Therefore, diverts youngsters in a negative way . Here, I would like to discord with given statement.
Numerous points can be put down to shore up my view. First and foremost, internal talent lays down the foundation of road to success. Besides this, Dedicated efforts made by celebrities make them owner of achievements to earn fame. To illustrate this, Sachin Tendulkar, called a record bo...
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Sentence: Hence, bieng prominent requires passionate endeavours along with talent.
Error: bieng Suggestion: bing
Sentence: Others think that dashing apperance is dominating factor to support someone to gain massive fame nationally or internationally.
Error: apperance Suggestion: appearance
Sentence: For instance, Paris Hilton, Brad pitt, David Backhem are extremely popular because of their astonishing outlook of personality than others inspite of they have not had as much achievements as others have possessed.
Error: inspite Suggestion: in spite
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