Write a letter to your friend about your prolems
Dear Endy,
It has been a long time since the last time we met each other. I hope your family and you are safe in the COVID-19 pandemic.
Do you have any problems in your life?
I have a lot of problems in my life, and I know that confiding is often the first step toward emotional healing. Therefore I want to tell you about my problems. In recently, I have to face with deadlines, so I have to study under pressure. Besides, I have some headaches if I have to work hours in front of the screen. It makes me tired and exhausted. Normally, I will go out with my friends to release the stress. However, because of Covid-19 pandemic, we have to stay indoors. I tried so hard to manage.
However, everything has the solution. I tried connecting with my friend through the Internet. At first, we were not used to it, but we gradually liked that way of contact. Besides, I have learned many lessons about the value of health and life in this pandemic. However, I hope everything will recover soon, so we can meet the others in person.
How about you? Are you having problems or stress in your life? I hope you can share with me.
I would love to hear from you.
Best wishes,
Anh Tuyet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...he first step toward emotional healing. Therefore I want to tell you about my problems. I...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34080717489 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36843479962 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591928251121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1689078607 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.0952380952 106.682146367 43% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.619047619 20.7667163134 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.2380952381 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115184152618 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038609232004 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555320689473 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755492365408 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053156923525 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.3 13.0946893788 33% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.71 12.4159519038 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.