1.Do you think cardless society is a realistic scenario? What could be the possible advantages
or disadvantages.
A cashless society, where physical money is no longer in use
and transactions are conducted solely through digital means,
is becoming increasingly feasible in today's technologically
advanced world. While it is not be a fully realistic scenario
at present, let's see the possible advantages and disadvantages
of a cashless society.
Firstly, the advantages of cashless society offers convenience
in transactions. It eliminates the need to carry physical money.
Digital transactions in a cardless society can provide enhanced
security measures compared to physical currency. The risk of theft
is greatly reduced. A cashless society has the potential to increase
the easier access of banking services which leads to avoid usage of
traditional banking services. It makes easy to keep the track of
transactions of an individual or in business.
Secondly, the disadvantages of a cashless society may raise concerns
about personal privacy. This will make the hackers to collect and exploit
the personal data of an individuals. This cashless society is vulnerable
to elderly or rural people who may struggle to adapt to this society. This
makes to heavily reliable on technology and internet connectivity. people
who rely on daily transactions like homeless people may find difficult in
absence of cash.
In a nutshell, I pen down saying that cashless society has advantages in terms
of convenience, security. However, there are potential drawbacks related to privacy,
technology dependency. So, striking a balance between the benefits and challenges is
crucial in shaping a future with cashless society with ensuring broad access, privacy
protection, and the well-being of all members of society.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ically advanced world. While it is not be a fully realistic scenario at present,...
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Line 19, column 22, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...llect and exploit the personal data of an individuals. This cashless society is vulnerable t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 20, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... may struggle to adapt to this society. This makes to heavily reliable on technolog...
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Line 21, column 68, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...n technology and internet connectivity. people who rely on daily transactions like ...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Who
...gy and internet connectivity. people who rely on daily transactions like homeles...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gy and internet connectivity. people who rely on daily transactions like homeles...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7722007722 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13416022273 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4555819439 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4375 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.12807881773 606% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163212827365 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506594617585 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717575390855 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0423824188482 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604944894061 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.89 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ically advanced world. While it is not be a fully realistic scenario at present,...
^^
Line 19, column 22, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...llect and exploit the personal data of an individuals. This cashless society is vulnerable t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 20, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... may struggle to adapt to this society. This makes to heavily reliable on technolog...
^^^^
Line 21, column 68, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...n technology and internet connectivity. people who rely on daily transactions like ...
^^^^^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Who
...gy and internet connectivity. people who rely on daily transactions like homeles...
^^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gy and internet connectivity. people who rely on daily transactions like homeles...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7722007722 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13416022273 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4555819439 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4375 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.12807881773 606% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163212827365 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506594617585 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717575390855 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0423824188482 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604944894061 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.89 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.