In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed. Does a common man suffer from a
group’s ideology? Express your opinion and support it with reasons and examples
from own experience.
In a war ideas, it is people who get killed\” it implies that have
consequences on the individual. A war is happening on a single person
ideology where it suffers a common man too. I completely disagree with the
idea of war.
These ideologies escalate into violent actions where the innocent people often
become victims of warfare, terrorism or other forms of violence. Historical
examples like world war1 and 2 are the examples of the loss of countless
lives. The ideology conflict and opposing ideas may target the individuals with
the dominant ideology, which leads to human rights abuses, imprisonment, or
even execution. These ideological conflicts can lead to social diversions and
can lead to violence of individual rights. Examples like the religious conflict
between Hindu and Muslim in country India.
It is important to note that statement reflects a general observation and it
doesn’t imply that every individual will suffer, and the impact can vary
depending on duration of the conflict.
In a nutshell, I pen down saying that these ideologies can shape societies and
individuals and arising conflicts can indeed lead to suffering and loss of life.
History provides numerous examples of how ideological resulted in individual
casualties. Resolving ideological conflicts requires dialogue understanding
and a commitment to peaceful coexistence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'idea'?
Suggestion: idea
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Message: Unpaired symbol: '“' seems to be missing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59433962264 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01655276792 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617924528302 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1328302238 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8333333333 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 7.25397266985 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.12807881773 460% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200271389475 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082771918762 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617224978372 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543481877185 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641980319721 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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