write about any recent invention that you think proved beneficial
Or detrimental to society.
In recent years, the rapid pace of technological advancements has
led to numerous inventions, one such invention that has both positive
and negative effects is social media such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram
and Snapchat. It made revolutionized the way people connect with others
and share information. I would like to explain the benefits and detrimental
aspects of social media in the following paragraph.
Firstly, the beneficial aspects of social media has made connect with people
More easy, convenient and accessible. It made to connect people with all corners
of the world. Social media became essential instrument for spreading social and
political awareness among people. It also helpful in raising charitable funds, and
also raising voice against illegal activities. It also helps the business people to
connect with their customers. It also becomes cost effective platform for marketing and
advertising their products and also to establish their brands and create successful ventures.
Secondly, the demerits of social media is affecting the mental health. Excessive
use of social media has been major reason for causes various problems like anxiety,
depression and mental health. Social media has become a platform for the rapid
spread of misinformation and fake news. Due to lack of fact checking which makes
difficult to distinguish between accurate information and fake news. It also increases
the online harassment and cyberbullying. It makes individuals concerns about the
privacy breaches and misuse of their personal information.
In a nutshell, I pen down saying that social media has undoubtedly offered various
benefits, and also responsible for its potential drawbacks. Society must work towards
the positive aspects and eliminating the negative effects of the invention for individual
well being.
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- write about any recent invention that you think proved beneficial Or detrimental to society 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 31, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eople to connect with their customers. It also becomes cost effective platform fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78260869565 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87578012392 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.127047372 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8823529412 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.12807881773 557% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0558691375436 0.242375264174 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176163380354 0.0925447433944 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286345605433 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0175987065571 0.151781067708 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267794177173 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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