27. Our planet is suffering from multitude problem, which one is the biggest problem and things to do to resolve it.
On one hand, technological and industrial advances have made human life easy. However, this has increased carbon emissions, toxic waste pollution, and climate change. This has led to increasing in the frequency and intensity of disasters all over the world. Millions of people from various countries have suffered. Unfortunately, the developing and the underdeveloped countries have to suffer more.
In the race of becoming a developed country, developing countries such as India have unplanned development. They are replacing lush green forests with concrete jungles. However, they can replant the trees in other places instead of cutting them. Further, this has led many rivers to flood villages and cities during monsoon. Such activities have disturbed the lives of the people and have caused adverse effects on ecology and ecosystem. There are various stories about wild animals attacking villages for food in such countries.
The only way to balance the ecology is to plant more trees. The greener the countries will be the better will be the quality of life. There is an increase in understanding and awareness as now people celebrate world environment day. On such events many students at schools and universities to plants trees and encourage them to perform the same activity with their families.
To sum up, climate change is a major issue. If this is not solved then our future generations will have to pay for it.
- Growing English language. 55
- computer and online games should not be allowed in schools while studying. 80
- climate change who responsible whether govt or industries. 88
- Company’s top level authorities should get their employees in decision making process. Discuss 72
- computer and online games should not be allowed in schools while studying. 77
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23043478261 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76229336789 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639130434783 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8389880941 50.4703680194 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.7647058824 104.977214359 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5294117647 20.9669160288 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41176470588 7.25397266985 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0383031096588 0.242375264174 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0128281389422 0.0925447433944 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242567352027 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0289824670165 0.151781067708 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292207097991 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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