large shopping mall replace small shops
The contemporary human lives in the world, which is being shaped by latest trends and approaches. Which mushroomed out from the different regions of the globe. Whether, large shopping malls replace small shops has become a moot point since many years. Opponent and proponents of both the views have own strong arguments. Before I came to any conclusion, I would like to shed some lights on the both side of views in forthcoming paragraphs.
First and foremost, there are many advantages, but most cons pious is that people can buy from one roof of mall, save time, such as. Gucci, Prada, lots branded clothes we can buy from one stop shop in the large shopping mall.
On the other hand, high cost products everyone cannot afford, basically small shops owner lost their jobs in the market because large shops take place. For example, low-level and high level having big difference in their life styles.
After the pondering over a great of thoughts and deliberation with myself I concluded that getting products and service from one place and unemployment in low class people in the world. Although it has some disadvantages, but we cannot ignore the bright side of the picture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...shaped by latest trends and approaches. Which mushroomed out from the different regio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.915 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4878454534 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 379.143842365 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6824840702 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3636363636 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35626473082 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119373472717 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19853803989 0.071462118173 278% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184040847969 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107691582358 0.0609392437508 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 55.0591133005 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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