3. The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do you think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
Environmental issues are at all-time high in the current century and is one of the major concerns around the world, as many countries are in red or danger zone from a global warming perspective. Immediate Dire actions are necessary from each and every inhabitant of this planet to have a livable future for the coming generations.
Environmental depletion or polluted environment doesn’t happen within a day, a week or not even in a decade’s time, but this has occurred due to constant environmental abuse across generations. A major part is played by the most intelligent species on the face of earth, the humans, which proved to be a stepping ladder to the current environmental situation. Deforestation, pollution, harmful gases and wastes released because of technological advances and their careless misdemeanor is few the major causes to environment’s current situation.
Governments can play a vital role in controlling pollution by regulating new norms in favour of the environment and against those who disturb the environmental balance. Governments can also promote using public transports and find ways to reduce the use of private vehicles, they can also promote use of greener energy like solar power and wind energy. Organizations can play their part and use disposable packaging or produce more eco-friendly products.
Our world is dying and we are responsible for it, hence it is our moral duty to help prevent a catastrophe. A common man can start by switching off unwanted appliances to save energy to even stopping mass deforestation for skyscrapers and planting more trees around them. Every individual has a role in protection of the planet they live in no matter how small or how big. Every small initiative by people can lead to a massive drive for a better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19520547945 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19287380604 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619863013699 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6190807654 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.416666667 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 7.25397266985 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115111933394 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388464152505 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219313862123 0.071462118173 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596249349559 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225586841424 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.