Are all the jobs equal? Are skilled and unskilled employees treated equally? Have you heard of manual scavengers? Write about the problems faced by unskilled employees. What do you suggest to people to stop doing discrimination?
Not all the jobs are equal at all. Many are very different. For example, an engineer works with technology however, a lawyer works with laws and a doctor takes care of human body.
Moreover, unskilled employees are treated differently from skilled ones. They need to be looked after when working otherwise a drawback may happen and everybody can be damaged. For instance, when he is working with airplanes maintenance. If something goes wrong, probably the passangers and the stuff may die. Then, he can be accused of murder.
Furthermore, they might become unemployer for a long time. For example, not knowing how to execute tasks around the sectors of the company is a big issue. Therefore, he will stay behind others and end up being fired.
One of the solutions to stop the discrimination is to prepare the employees equally. Once they start the job, companies should give them specialization courses in every area. This way, employees might work properly and no one would suffer.
In addition, they need to take extra courses outside the company as well. So that employees can execute tasks efficiently.
Finally, in order to stop discrimination, unskilled employees should be provided with the same courses as the skilled ones. Thus, the entire company would work well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ra courses outside the company as well. So that employees can execute tasks efficiently...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07109004739 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72506490778 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630331753555 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.5024630542 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7751665439 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.4444444444 104.977214359 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7222222222 20.9669160288 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.25397266985 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114705739406 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409936660653 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687720665948 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588224911537 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368803863661 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 12.6369458128 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.94 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.94827586207 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.3980295567 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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