Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries.” According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals?individual?
Nowadays, the xenophobia in western countries has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “what solution can be proposed by the government and individuals to address the xenophobia?”. It is a widely held view that finding an appropriate solution for this issue is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that numerous action must be carried out to solve the problem of xenophobia in western countries.
To begin with, it is a common belief that plays a vital role in the fast-changing world. To put into consideration, I express why I express this idea. First and foremost is that the western countries think that their resources are being consumed by the migrants and it is against the citizen’s rights. Secondly, it can be argued that there is a sense of hostility, racism, and nationalism among the majority of western people that encourage them to prevail the xenophobia. In addition to this information, the migrants use their job opportunities to profit from the high living standard. A very tangible example to illustrate would be the Germans who are reluctant accepting migrants in their country.
However, there is no doubt that various solution must be considered. One possible approach is to obtain tougher regulations against the xenophobia. Another alternative approach would be holding the educational session to raise the public awareness. Lastly, the western countries should be prevented to hate crimes and hate speech.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that. the prevention of the xenophobia must be taken into account by the government. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ophobia in western countries has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...To recapitulate, I firmly believe that. the prevention of the xenophobia must be ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35664335664 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12273586618 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58041958042 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.546583072 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.133333333 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310824004336 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801694674611 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954043092446 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175359510274 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116643537394 0.0609392437508 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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