In a cashless society, people use more credit cards, do you think cashless society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
In this era, It is an irrefutable fact that cashless society, people use more credit cards play integral and indispensable role in the life of people. It is the 'chief defence of nation'. In this essay, I am discussing the demerits of cashless society and credits cards along with the plethora of merits in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with the advantage of in a cashless society,people use myriad credit cards. The first and foremost point is cashless society use credit cards is more essential because young juveniles have no afraid of loss the money and stolen the money. Secondly, if they have no cash,they use the system of online payment. Last but not least, it has made the life of people"a piece of cake". For instance:- people go anywhere in the world they easily use there card anywhere,but it is very hard to carry the money everywhere,because every country have there own currency.
On the contrary " As every rose has some thorns". Similarly there are some demerits as well. Firstly,people have more afraid to lost there card. Moving further if they move one country to other country then they have face more problem in internet banking. Additionally they have more hard to login there banking account in other country because they first fill the code which they receive in their mobile.
In the epilogue, after mulling over all the aspects, I have come to the conclusion that " one cannot ignore the bright side of future" that it has made the life of people " a bed of roses". Therefore one should use it efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 1207.87684729 65% => OK
No of words: 154.0 242.827586207 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08441558442 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.92707691288 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.023687894 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 139.433497537 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616883116883 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 379.143842365 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6415855219 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.875 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301749858464 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137281134424 0.0925447433944 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132407687364 0.071462118173 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240375865256 0.151781067708 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100865169163 0.0609392437508 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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