In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
The important effect of credit cards which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is a beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of cashless society that it is very beneficial has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. In my opinion, this proposition appears to be rational and this essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that in the cashless society the people use more credit cards and debit cards instead of carrying cash in their wallets. For instance, if people lose their wallet and they have more money in their wallet so they cannot get their money back. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that the credit cards are safe because credit cards are linked with our banks.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate this argument and which can certainly overwhelm them potential influence of credit cards but the most alarming one is that if the people carry only their cards for shopping and the shopkeeper has no machine to transfer the money with credit cards then it may create an agitated situation. As an illustration, nowadays everyone wants to have only credit cards all the time but it is not logical to have them every time because society is not completely digitized. Hence, it is apparent, why many are against credit cards.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of cashless society are instrumental indeed, however its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10544217687 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54912628093 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8830727325 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.1 104.977214359 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.9669160288 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225125388127 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956129768619 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480597726544 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12764497013 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607661928927 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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