In some countries it is legal for citizens to carry firearms for self-defense purposes. In your opinion, should every country in the world make it legal for their citizens to carry firearms for self-defense purposes?
The topic of self defense has become a matter of discussion for quit few years now. Although, the some quarters in society are engaged in discussing this vital topic. But there has been not substantial result. Likewise, in few countries it is approved for people to carry weapon for self defense purposes. I partially agree with this topic, so I will discuss should all nations allow their population to carry firearms for self defense and give my own opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, it is right said that weapon is like friend, which can help us in problem, likewise, it can prevent the people from some crimes like snatching, stealing and kidnapping. Moreover, girls and boys can use them for self defense, which will make them brave.
On the other hand, some people think that this proposal will increase the crime rate, because some people will use them in small conflicts of the society, so it is a risk if murders. Besides this, some aggressive people will do issue of those weapons, due to which it will damage two lives victim and attacker, due to which their families will have to face some problems. In addition, firearms are also harmful for teenagers and children, because they can choose astray with help of weapons and it will bad effect on the kids.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise, this topic also has mixed bag. But according to my opinion government should make legal for people to keep firearms for self defense, because it is not bad despite some disadvantages. But the individuals who want to keep the weapons in their homes, they should use some precautions, like these should keep away from children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, likewise, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 6.10837438424 262% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81118881119 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42467832732 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1895910586 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336507328621 0.242375264174 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133306913453 0.0925447433944 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143598792628 0.071462118173 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20763712471 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132633716517 0.0609392437508 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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