the claim that animals have rights has been the subject of much debate since 1970 are zoo's helping or hurting our animals. should zoo's be banned ?do you agree or dis agree
In 1970 law was passed by the government is that, the animals have a right of freedom and they live in jungle. But at that time the rich or kings were go to the jungle for hunting and they kills many animals which is bad for our enivornment. Some people says that zoos are helpful for animals while other disagree on this statment. I will discuss the notion in upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, the zoos are very hepling for our animals because those animals who are endanger, the zoos are helping in many ways to those animals like they can provide the food which is very important thing and hard to find in jungle. In jungle animals have risk but in zoos they are safe because in the zoos no one can kill them. The every zoo staf members was very caring and they care all animal with carefully. Zoos are also a entertaining for tourists. For example many people cannot see the animals in jungle because in jungle have risk of life but they have a chance to see amimals in zoos.
On the other hand, aniamls have a righ of freedom because they also want to live life in open environment. Because he is a environment friendly and in zoos they fell like very upset. For, animals the zoos was like a prison.
To conclude that zoos should not banned they can increase the space of zoos and which is benefical for animals to live life as they want.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rnment is that, the animals have a right of freedom and they live in jungle. But ...
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...g for our animals because those animals who are endanger, the zoos are helping in many...
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...ll animal with carefully. Zoos are also a entertaining for tourists. For example ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36758893281 5.00649968141 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14592839365 2.71678728327 79% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0024944279 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196024505435 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888255343185 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489033271982 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140185018506 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302767337914 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.1260098522 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.9458128079 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.5310837438 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.32886699507 80% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 55.0591133005 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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