In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on the rise in using credits cards in a cashless society can lead to thought-provoking discussions. Irrespective to the numerous arguments that exit on either side, we can measure some advantages and disadvantages which play vital roles in our daily life.
The benefits that are associated with using the credit cards are numerous. To begin with, the credit cards in our cashless society are important, and they save us from being theft. It is also observed that if the card gets lost by its owner at any place, it will be difficult for anybody else to use it without its password. Therefore, the aforementioned discussion shows that the savings in our bank account is safe from other hands.
As every coin has two sides, not having a cash money in our pockets and depend only on the credit cards are also associated with few disadvantages. First and foremost, when we go to buy from local shop that does not have the credit machine, we have to pay only by cash. This exemplifies that there are some situation where cash is essential.
In conclusion, I see that there is equally evidence to support the arguments I have provided, and hence, my opinion is that the cashless society is perfect for those who need some security, but we cannot deny the importance of cash.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'cash money'.
Suggestion: cash money
...As every coin has two sides, not having a cash money in our pockets and depend only on the c...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
...h. This exemplifies that there are some situation where cash is essential. In conclusi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83966244726 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8070522076 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4889886742 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.7 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139825358931 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570534080243 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362206981405 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775262858102 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036279701359 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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