A competitive environment in school and university would bring excellence and need to be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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A competitive environment in school and university would bring excellence and need to be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on the competitive environment in school and university which is a result of the success can lead to thought-provoking discussions. my opinion is that irrespective to the numerous arguments that exit on either side, I agree that it needs to be encouraged.

There are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, the university environment is definitely shaping the students behavior during their early age, and it is one of the major factor to allow them succeed in their future business life. it is important to notice that when university has competitive organized programs with varied subjects, it has a pivotal role to develop not only students` knowledge but also their personality which is the significant aspect of their future success. Therefore, the aforementioned argument shows that such environment boots students` skills positively.

Another pivotal role of the arguments is that competition between students is not an unhealthy approach amongst them, but it allows them to reveal their best in different disciplines. when universities or schools put students under such environment, they are obliged to work hard and think out of the box to get their assignments done appropriately. This exemplifies that competitive system is vital for healthy success.

I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided, and hence, my opinion is that encouraging such activities within the early ages is converted to a healthy community which is needed for country development.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40697674419 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24543611825 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.132409187 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.5 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150974259694 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591619475942 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466690297197 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941796578162 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673298941397 0.0609392437508 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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