Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are role for youngsters. Do you support it or not?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on the role of successful celebrities such as actors or sport stars on new generations can lead to thought-provoking discussions. my opinion is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exit on either side, I do support for some extent.
there are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, celebrities gain their fame from the followers, and they have a huge influence on them. It is important to note that new generations copy blindly actors` actions and fashion without thinking, because they take celebrities as role models and sometimes as mentors for their future life. Therefore, this exemplifies that celebrities should take care of their behavior in public to avoid negative impact on their followers and spectators.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that we cannot depend on only the celebrities either in arts or sports to guide our younsters. First and foremost, there are a lot of other fields, in which our youth should be more involved such as science. When country`s new generation be participated in post-graduate activites and influenced by scientists, we will be having a balanced community to support the country`s progress and development.The aforementioned argument shows that not only celebrities are the model role, but also there are other people can shape and instrument our youngsters.
In conclusion, I see that there is equally evidence to supprt the arguments I have provided, and hence, my opinion is that we can not deny the actors vital key impact on youngsters, and there are others do the same impact equally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22627737226 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1754509493 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580291970803 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.3309666331 50.4703680194 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.2 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.9669160288 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149693999539 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495144372626 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519066072854 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920334737654 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744637691671 0.0609392437508 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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