Some people say law can change human behaviour. Do you agree?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on law`s effect on the human behaviour can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My opinion is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exit on each side, I strongly agree that laws have a paramount positive impact on the human actions.
There are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, government put laws to secure their country, and these laws potentially reduced the crime rate in several developed communities. it is important to note that when strict punishment is applied on the people who break the laws, people avoid doing unlawful actions. Therefore, the aforementioned argument shows that the importance of laws in community and its effect on people`s behaviour
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that law is important in shaping reckless drivers, and it is measured on roads. First and foremost, since some countries released new laws by imposing huge fines on the drunk people, the accidents rate got significantly plummeted. This exemplifies that the human behaviour is proportionally related to the laws and its sanctions.
In conclusion, I see that there is a strong evidence to support the arguments I have provided, and hence, my opinion is that laws and its strict sanctions have a vital role in people behaviour in a positive way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22026431718 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10154059099 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2621728941 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.666666667 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29550541974 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107406918845 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490058172635 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162623655677 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361106005229 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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