Some people prefer to spend holidays in resorts where everything is organized for them and they take little interest in the country they are visiting. Others prefer to travel around the country and to see how the people live, to get to know their customs and traditions and cuisine.
In this contemporary era, there is a drastic modification which can be seen in each and every field. Due to this, in modern era traveling plays a beneficial role in human life but beauty of the key of the beholder. So some prefer to enjoy their holidays in resorts and visiting in other countries but others like to travel around the country. Further, I will elaborate both point of views and concerns in the upcoming paragraphs, before reaching at any conclusion.
According to my perception, there are ample of arguments to support my perceptive. Hence, one of the most vital argument for the demand can initially be mentioned that majority of people are open minded and also they are busy in their work. Therefore, they like to visit resorts and others countries such as Dubai, Thailand and many more. Moreover, it is universal truth that without travel life like a bird without wings as well as reduce the stress. Furthermore, doubtless, in these days large number of resorts provides better opportunities such as food, sweat rooms and so on.
On the other hand, there are some compelling views for people who like to travel around the country. The first and foremost is that it enhances the knowledge related to cultures and traditions. Secondly, it is cheaper traveling as compared to travel in other countries and even it is reduce the communication gap into the religions. Last but not the least, in case of students, they get information related to education and future careers.
Hammering on the last nail, after all the entire analysis, I would like to say that different people have different views and choices. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that both sides have pros but it depends on their budget. In addition, it gives us relax able experience and reduce the stress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...ravel in other countries and even it is reduce the communication gap into the religion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, after all, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 303.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92739273927 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68827227589 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.2032514511 50.4703680194 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.3125 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4375 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257224166792 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715392083508 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903539452099 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139339794262 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615010393207 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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