Combat sports such as boxing are popular. Some people believe that they encourage violence while others believe that they promote self-restraint and discipline. Choose which you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your experiences, observations and readings
The idea of promoting combat sports like boxing is widely debated with many people claiming that these kind of sports are dangerous and fatal for the players. However, I believe that there is another side to it and these sports are self-motivating and makes a person more disciplined towards his goals. This essay will further elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, there are many reasons why combat sports should be greatly promoted among the younger ones. The most conspicuous one is that although these sports require a strict physical training and strength, they make players more balanced and focused in their lives. For example, UFC players are fit, dedicated and have self-control in them which helps them to excel in their game. Thus, it is apparent these sports are beneficial for people and should be promoted.
Nevertheless, there are some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of combat sports and the most alarming one is that by playing these sports, a person loses his temper shortly and can face extreme anger issues. Furthermore, players can fall into serious injuries and can even lose their life. Hence, there is no doubt that by playing these sports, one can become aggressive, irritated and frustrated.
In view of the arguments outlined above, the impact of combat sports is prominent, although in my view these sports should be promoted to make a person more composed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... debated with many people claiming that these kind of sports are dangerous and fatal for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, kind of, no doubt, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07024793388 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53460780644 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566115702479 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8893957549 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.545454545 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.25397266985 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16424071328 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626036406125 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471371169407 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982054091965 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395297825012 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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