Some people believe that law changes human behaviour. Do you agree with it?
Nowadays, the significant influence of law has attracted many controversies and drawn attention from the public. Some people contend that law guides humans and change their behaviour. Perhaps, in my view, there is a change in attitude when people resort to legal compliance. This essay will further elaborate on both the sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, there are various arguments in favour of a change in human behaviour due to the strict law. The most conspicuous one is that government enforces stringent rules and strict penalties to curb crime. Furthermore, they act as watchdogs to prevent the unlawful activities and supervise the actions of its people. For example, there is a fall in the cases of drunken driving by enforcing strict penalties. Hence, there is a positive influence of legal actions on the people of the nation.
Nevertheless, there is another view, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of law on its people. The most alarming one is that a person’s faith is badly dented when the offender is freed unpunished. For instance, there are cases when the law is not executed to the full extent and the innocent suffers whole life. Thus, in such cases including rapes, genocide and mass murder, the guilty is unprosecuted and therefore, allows him to do more crime.
In the view of the arguments outlined above, the impact of the law on human behaviour is prominent, and by this way, it directs a person to become a good man.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95256916996 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75653658815 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.7742973063 50.4703680194 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.5 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261762589152 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864056691862 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123511666468 0.071462118173 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145742099492 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651866707075 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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