Communication has changed significantly in the last 10 years. Discuss pros and cons
In this globalized world, the way of communication is changed by the advanced technology. A drastic rise up in using mobile phones has changed the communication. Smartphones brought a new way of communication. Even though, it is an advanced version to communicate it also has both advantages and disadvantages.
To begin with, from last decade people are communicating all over the world through smart. It brought our world very near. There are many facilities with the smartphone. One can communicate very easily with calling, social media applications, messaging, and video calling. For example, students who are living far away from their parents for higher education can communicate by video call. It provides face to face communication where students can feel happy by seeing their parents. Moreover, the smartphone also provides many applications which are useful to education like grammar apps, language improving apps etc.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages with the smartphones overusing and miss using it. The smartphone brings many changes, especially in teenagers. Many aspirants use social media for more time which is a big time waster. Moreover, for children, playing games on smartphones don’t provide any physical exercise.
By this, it can be concluded that, even though there is some negative impact by smartphone using, the advantages over flow the disadvantages. Using it in a proper way brings many benefits to the human life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43043478261 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05143370189 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3342507983 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.4705882353 104.977214359 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5294117647 20.9669160288 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0876044259779 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291567568236 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409660320765 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499094026254 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514563991102 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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