People usually mix their private and professional life. What are the pros and cons of this?
In this modern world, one of the controversial topics is related to maintaining privacy between work and personal life. A group of individuals feel that personal and office life are linked so they should be mixed. While, some people feel that privacy between both should be maintained. This contentious topic has been profoundly debated in several forums. I will gauge both the advantages and disadvantages meticulously before inclining towards a rational conclusion.
Throwing light on the advantages, mixing work with personal life provides an option to work for one while you are working for another. A person who works from home for his office can adjust his schedule to complete any work either it is personal or work related. Furthermore, it can help to increase the productivity of a person in some cases. For instance, if you have some office work pending you can complete it from your home which will help you to be efficient for your profession.
Paradoxically, although it increases productivity of a person when he works for personal goals from work place and vice versa, it also effects your quality of work as focus is diverted between multiple goals. Any person who cannot adjust between both lives eventually ended up messing his whole life. For example, if you do not give proper attention to your family life it can be very stressful for your family members.
To summaries, even though mixing work with personal life has some benefits, it is important that you should keep it separate which will help to maintain quality of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ife are linked so they should be mixed. While, some people feel that privacy between ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99613899614 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69468750825 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544401544402 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3021311997 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0869271703748 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396389357311 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335799015101 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687347119938 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335460944724 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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