Some people believe that confidence wins bigger games that knowledge alone cannot. Also, that accumulating knowledge makes no sense until one has the confidence to put it to use. Is it true that knowledge will help one win a struggle only if it is put into practice with full confidence, or is it confidence without knowledge that is null and void?
There is a sparkle debate if confidence outdoes knowledge, or if it is the vice-versa. While some people think that confidence plays a more important role, others believe the opposite. In my opinion, confidence and knowledge walk hand in hand.
First of all, when taking an exam, a student must have plenty of knowledge. He/she should be able to overcome many obstacles so as to pass the test. However, before taking the test, he ought to be very confident about what he is going to face. Therefore, being sure that he is prepared to take the test will assure him good marks. For instance, when I was attending college, I realized that even though I was feeling very confident to take the tests, I did not have enough knowledge about the subject. But, as I started studying with my classmates, my knowledge began growing, and I finally could finish the college.
Moreover, once we pursue a lot of knowledge, our confidence arises likewise. There is no way to happen the opposite because we have the feeling that if we are given a difficult problem to solve, we know that we will succeed afterwards.
Finally, when having a lot of knowledge, we are certain that we fathom the world around us, and we are able to surpass many drawbacks due to our confidentiality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ould be able to overcome many obstacles so as to pass the test. However, before taking t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6981981982 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69216036989 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617117117117 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.71428571429 350% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7229681383 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9166666667 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127584355202 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512853840453 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454068687736 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783974473695 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701359616423 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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