Cultural Shock is a new worrying concern for few immigrants. What are the few possible options to eradicate this?
Nowadays, the cultural shock has become a terrifying experience for immigrants. However, there are some actions that can be taken to work around this problem which can be easily eliminated. This essay will discuss two of these solutions and a brief conclusion about the subject.
To begin, there are many factors that cause discomfort when in a different nation. The creation of awareness groups is the first step to break bad impressions and also turn the newly arrived more familiar with the new culture. For example, meetings where natives explain their culture and laws. Certainly, immigrants will learn how to behave and obey their new home.
In addition, the adoption of the immigrants in the society is important to ensure their confidence. The promotion of immigrants' culture and festive celebrations unifying the locals with the purpose of a friendly environment. For example, the celebration of the Chinese Year in Australia. In fact, these events allow immigrants and natives to know each other in a pacific way.
To sum up, Cultural Shock has become a bad experience among immigrants. However, the integration of visitors with the locals through informative meetings and the joint of the celebrations of the different cultures are the keys to eradicate this feeling.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a pacific way" with adverb for "pacific"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...migrants and natives to know each other in a pacific way. To sum up, Cultural Shock has become ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, for example, in addition, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23300970874 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81313925612 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.114826226 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9230769231 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179544624768 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615313041938 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618201539432 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107138366945 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510859476099 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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