In developing countries tourism has disadvantages or advantages

The importance of travelers is always a debatable topic. Even though many people claim that tourism has beneficial for the development of the society, however, others reject this notion and argued that it leads to negative impact on the society. The merits of the tourism are more than demerits. The following essay would further elaborate both pros and cons of tourism.

There are myriad of reasons that further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems to the fact that visitor is beneficial for the economy of the country. The economy of the country is basically depend on tourism in developing countries because the work, business, growth all depend on tourism so it is a positive development. To exemplify, a research conducted in the Harvard University shows that the UAE is one of the developing countries and the economy of the country depend on tourism. That example can clarify that how tourism is beneficial for country.

However, there are pitfalls that negate with this argument and that can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of tourism, but the most alarming one is rooted to the fact that globetrotter is become a cause of serious disease which is harmful for the whole society. For example, the research shows that corona is one of the dangers viruses which may lead to death and it is spread from tourism from one to another country.

According the argument aforementioned, one can reach to the conclusion that journeyer is crucial for the development of the society besides this some precautions is mandatory for the health of public.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...The economy of the country is basically depend on tourism in developing countries beca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06870229008 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70561963335 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492366412214 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5938282673 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246574789138 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104696298597 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101486798687 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141434744879 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979290570202 0.0609392437508 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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