Discuss both sides of Space travel vs. Current crucial problems faced by humans?
In today's world, where humans have accomplished advancement in technology now capable enough to think about the complex and tedious task such as space travels, We still face some of the crucial problems and one of them is pollution. This essay will discuss further on the crucial problems that humans are facing to that with space travel.
Firstly, as humans we are aware of the rising problem of the pollution that is being contributed from various sources such as factories and vehicles that are emitting harmful gases, still, we are reluctant to solve problems like this, but to invest on complicated technology to build the machine for space travel. Machines and technology used to build such space travel are enormous whereas current crucial problems which need to be addressed can be resolved by introducing new technology which may not need more time and effort.
Secondly, resolving crucial problem is not only important but also it can be resolve more quickly than to invest time and money for space travel. For example, an introduction of the electric car by Tesla, which became recently popular, will help curb the emission of harmful gasses. As we see the technology used to build such cars are less complicated and required less time and money than one could think of complicated space engine used. This clearly states how solving current crucial problems is essay and efficient than investing on space travel.
To conclude, the time and investment that humans should give are on current problems that are crucial than on building the machine for space travel, this will ensure the well-being of humans society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, whereas, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07434944238 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47947866101 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509293680297 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3824371047 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.666666667 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8888888889 20.9669160288 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.25397266985 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343725727471 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181333655226 0.0925447433944 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125513595405 0.071462118173 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252096179205 0.151781067708 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708024202334 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 69.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 62.5 Out of 90
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