With technology speeding up, more and more young people begin to use mobile phones and the Internet, but old people have little chance to be exposed to them. What ways could mobile phone and the Internet be useful to old people? How can old people be encouraged to use this new technology?
With rapidly moving technological world were technology and the complexity of using it is speeding up; especially mobile and internet with a greater extent, it is hard for old people to keep pace with the rate at which technology is getting evolved. As the metabolism rate usually goes down in old people which decrease the rate of understanding something. It is obvious, old people have little chance to be exposed to these latest technologies than young people do. In this essay we will discuss the ways in which old people can be encouraged to use these technology.
Firstly, young people should take initiative to make old people understand the importance of mobile and internet technology. As the importance of something brings the desire to use technology. For example, the cheap calls that one can make from a mobile phone using the internet is one of the ways to encourage the use of these technologies by expressing the importance of such use could potentially save money which in turn encourage old people to use technology.
Secondly, with the advancement of the technology , it is the technology that should come up with ways to simplify the experience of using mobile phone and internet. For example, mobile phone's user interface should be specially designed to suits the need of old people, as the at this age the ability of understanding information degrade as compared to young people who are an active and fast learner. This way, with improvising the user interface of the mobile phone can bring desire in old people for using such technology.
To conclude, with the above ways discuss that briefly explains the ways in which old people could be encouraged in using new technologies especially mobiles and internet would potentially allow old people to get exposed with such technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...at which technology is getting evolved. As the metabolism rate usually goes down i...
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Line 2, column 552, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...ich old people can be encouraged to use these technology. Firstly, young people should take i...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ance of mobile and internet technology. As the importance of something brings the ...
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Line 6, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., with the advancement of the technology , it is the technology that should come u...
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Line 6, column 240, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'suit'.
Suggestion: suit
...terface should be specially designed to suits the need of old people, as the at this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04666666667 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82426419637 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433333333333 0.580463131201 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1994362945 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.636363636 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.587808130818 0.242375264174 243% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.271833924683 0.0925447433944 294% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107780428308 0.071462118173 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.41912718107 0.151781067708 276% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467764207857 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.