Some people think imported food exerts positive impacts on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The advent of Globalization has brought forward many opportunities in humans life and one of that is imported foods. While some might disagree with the positive impacts on humans lives that one get from imported foods. I believe, imported foods have played a vital role in bringing positive impact on our lives. We will further discuss the positive impact that has brought upon us by imported foods.
Firstly, imported foods have brought people closer from around the world to experience the variety of foods, this has helped people know the culture and experiences the taste of the food. Some foods are produced in particular seasons that restrict people to wait for the particular seasons to come, while with the help of imported foods one could expect to get foods that are grown in other parts of the world due to the varying climatic condition found around the globe.This overall shows how positively our lives are impacted by imported foods.
Secondly, due to the introduction of the imported foods, the local market face competition. The competition varies from producing quality to quantity foods. This ensures that the foods which we want are available all seasons. This competition within local market encourage both the availability and the quality of the foods to be present in the market and hence exert positive impact our lives.
To conclude, as discussed briefly above, imported foods exert the positive impact on our lives by assuring food availability, its quality and the experience one can get from the foods that might be not available at the local places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08045977011 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53458049698 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486590038314 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.0131735052 50.4703680194 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.545454545 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330073772323 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136675398113 0.0925447433944 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882061882619 0.071462118173 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216578582133 0.151781067708 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442637228356 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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