Discuss the importance of tourism or what are the negative and positive impacts of tourism for developing countries?
In recent years, Tourism has become the key source of the economy for many counteries. Main reason for this is the gradual decrease in airfare. One can not deny the fact that tourism brings positive results but on the other hand it has few negative points too.
Tourism undoubtedly gives benefit to the hotels, restraunts and other traditional activities. This brings a great opportunity for skilled workers like drivers, cook and guides. Furthermore, it is beneficial for the traditions of country as , India is rich in culture and increasing tourism helps to take your culture to the world level.
On the flipside, there are some aspects of tourism whic may be harmful to the country. Tourists often carry quite expensive stuff like camers, phone and foreign currency unaware of surroundigs and this can be major target for theives. In addition, due to increase in toruism there are many illegal firms of guides and drivers which are running the buisness without any permissions from the government.
To conclude, it is clear that the tourism have many positives points but there are few negatives ones which cannot be ignored and to avoid all these crimes government should be strict and active. Eventually this will make tourism much easier and delightful.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eficial for the traditions of country as , India is rich in culture and increasing...
^^
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'crimes'' or 'crime's'?
Suggestion: crimes'; crime's
...annot be ignored and to avoid all these crimes government should be strict and active....
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, may, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11538461538 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56767115173 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649038461538 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2970812239 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7272727273 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27166513499 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980630137558 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553140038952 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163645435866 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612927107029 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eficial for the traditions of country as , India is rich in culture and increasing...
^^
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'crimes'' or 'crime's'?
Suggestion: crimes'; crime's
...annot be ignored and to avoid all these crimes government should be strict and active....
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, may, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11538461538 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56767115173 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649038461538 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2970812239 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7272727273 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27166513499 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980630137558 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553140038952 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163645435866 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612927107029 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.