Many young people nowadays are imitating celebrities in sports and movies. In your opinion, is this good or bad? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Young generation is always influenced by the celebrities of sports and showbiz. There are some famous personalities who are know by there bad histories of illegal activities but still youth follow them just because of their lifestyle, which is totally wrong for the young people. Undoubtedly, this is very serious concern fro our society and I will discuss the same below.
Many teenagers are just trying to imitiate there selfmade icons whether it is in sports or in movies, they just try to follow the lifestyle and habits of such celebrities. By doing such actions, they get involve in different kinds of crime like drug dealing and robbery for making money. Social media is also doing the work of fuel in this fire and impacting many lives by showing only luxeries of famous people but not there struggle to get them.
Youngsters are just leaving there homes just to become as rich and famous as there idols and this is making splits in families. Once these teens get rejected by film industry, they go through mental pressure as a result of this they easily gets addicted with drugs and other false activities. Due to this craziness, crime rate is consderably increasing day by day.
To conclude, it is undeniable fact that getting too much attached to actors and celebrities can affects one's personal and social life and one should see these sports player and actors as inspiration to achive what they have in their lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...iz. There are some famous personalities who are know by there bad histories of illegal ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...e are some famous personalities who are know by there bad histories of illegal activ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
...doubtedly, this is very serious concern fro our society and I will discuss the same...
^^^
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...ressure as a result of this they easily gets addicted with drugs and other false act...
^^^^
Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...d to actors and celebrities can affects ones personal and social life and one should...
^^^^
Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...nd social life and one should see these sports player and actors as inspiration to ach...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8693877551 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47113785176 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7053188753 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.3 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101716698051 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420852677272 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308049337012 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589523238023 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021106281069 0.0609392437508 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.