Do you support dangerous activities like extreme skiing? What are the reasons for that?

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Do you support dangerous activities like extreme skiing? What are the reasons for that?

Submitted by vahid07 on Thu, 01/25/2018 - 13:42

In the present era, extreme sports and its enormous impact have sparked a heated debate among people all around the globe. Although many people contest that adventurous sports are highly beneficial, there are groups of individuals holding conflicting views. I firmly believe the issue mentioned above can play a pivotal role in the success of every person, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.

From a scientific viewpoint, significant factors could be taken into account why I promote dangerous sports. First and foremost is making money correlated with a lucrative job as well as excitement, which means that these factors are inextricably bound up. According to my experience, when I was a university student, I have perused the British Journal of Psychology published a report in which it claims that depression and monotony will play a vital role. Hence, inevitable consequences of the self-confidence and happiness were seen by me in this respect.

However, there is no doubt that extreme sports can cause negative result as well. One persuasive argument is that it leads to serious injuries and mental problems in addition to addiction. For instance, scientific research undertaken by scholars of the prestigious university has shown if had they have more accurate information in advance, they would have faced problems effectively. Thus, it causes danger, suffering, and stressful condition.

To recapitulate, while there is compelling evidence on both sides, I widely believe that the benefits of adventurous sports outweigh its drawbacks. Not only the advantages of these kinds of activities prove the significance of risky sports, but also pinpoint sportsmanship.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47328244275 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01257972806 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687022900763 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6314707531 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.307692308 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0643257303568 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0212573036871 0.0925447433944 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241428819976 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.034700059847 0.151781067708 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189652647174 0.0609392437508 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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