Do you think card-less society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Do you think card-less society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the fact that card less is real and it has more benefits than drawbacks. Critics, however, claim that in this contemporary world credit cards are more reliable way to purchase any thing more conveniently. In my opinion, later argument is more ralistic and worth to believe.In this essay, I shall highlight some of the pros and cons of cash less society before deducing any final conclusion.

At the outset, there are myriad of argument discussing the fact that the advantages of carrying cash triumph over its disadvantages. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that for local shopping it is easy to buy things from any where more easily than to rely on credit or debit cards, where facilities are not available. As a prime example, my personal experience of visiting Thailand is one of its great example, where tourists mostly rely on cash to pay for local purchase.

Another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that in today's world, specifically in developed and some of the underdeveloped nations, credit and debit cards are easy and convenient way to purchase goods. Moreover, with in minutes and seconds we can transfer funds to person living anywhere in the world. Furthermore, credit cards are easy to carry any where with less chances of snatching, if it does happen you can easily block your card immediately.

In conclusion, foregoing discussion propounds that benefits of card less society are less than its drawbacks. Thus, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05243445693 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73416448494 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2053226051 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.636363636 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136283594755 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557503079979 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627195505759 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891730151647 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447894792269 0.0609392437508 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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