Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers?
In today's world, a plethora of products and goods are processed, packaged and sold to the groceries and supermarkets. Anyone including kids can buy them everywhere. Some of these products can be deleterious to kids if there's no proper label and accurate nutritional facts. In my view, I will discuss why both producers and consumers should take an account and make sure that the products they buy a sell are still safe for consumption.
Commodities like canned foods and stored in boxes are safe to eat, but there should be a worldwide standard to regulate and to approve its contents and ingredients. If you buy a stale product from the market, it will be detrimental to your health. Thus, all producers should label their products with appropriate expiry dates so that the consumers will know. The government in the local community should also implement the regulation and rule to oblige the small and medium businesses to standardize the packaging of their products.
Every individual citizen in the society should also double check the products that they purchase. For instance, eggs have a short-term expiration, and without proper check and being careless, this can lead to physical health jeopardy, if mistakenly consumed. Consumers should also check the tags and nutritional factors of the packaged merchandises to verify that the contents are matching and legitimate.
In conclusion, my opinion is that packaged products in various sorts are safe to purchase and utilize, but producers should include the correct packaging information, and the consumers are also accountable to examine and verify the products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'includes'.
Suggestion: includes
... the groceries and supermarkets. Anyone including kids can buy them everywhere. Some of t...
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Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
... products can be deleterious to kids if theres no proper label and accurate nutritiona...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 8.36945812808 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26538461538 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85717978632 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0613986076 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270182293413 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989200986313 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689451876925 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175826009678 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421269002746 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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