Some people believe that price is the only consideration while buying
something. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your
opinion and include relevant examples.
Generally, few percentages of the population consider money as a
primary element when purchasing a product or service. I agree to the
statement as wealth always plays an important role in people’s life and it
is safe to spend money on necessary goods than the luxuries.
On one hand, advertisement plays a vital role in marketing a product by
pressurizing people to buy things despite of their capacity to afford.
People are mesmerized by the adverts shown in television, roads,
banners, shops and lose their ability to re-think if the product is worth
the money. It resists them to categorise the products based on their
quality and durability. For instance, people are habituated to spend
plenty of money on any product or services where discounts are offered
irrespective of its necessity.
On the other hand, mankind now a days are interested in owning luxury
products even if their account balance does not favour. However, banks
have found the solution. They provide credit cards which helps people to
achieve their desires and pushes them into debt. There are situations
where money should not be the primary consideration, for instance, in
emergency cases related to hospitals. Another demonstration is, people
buy luxurious homes by taking loans though cost effective homes are
available in the market and struggle to repay.
I would like to conclude stating that, money needs to be spent wisely
and it should be the primary consideration before investing into any
product or service, as wealth is just a variable and not a constant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Primary
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Suggestion: Quality
...ategorise the products based on their quality and durability. For instance, people ar...
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Suggestion: Irrespective
... services where discounts are offered irrespective of its necessity. On the other hand, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...necessity. On the other hand, mankind now a days are interested in owning luxury produ...
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Suggestion: a day; days
...ssity. On the other hand, mankind now a days are interested in owning luxury produ...
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Suggestion: Products
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Suggestion: Have
...lance does not favour. However, banks have found the solution. They provide credit...
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Suggestion: Achieve
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Suggestion: Emergency
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Suggestion: Available
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Suggestion: Product
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34251968504 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82512892851 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0571248384 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.083333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0614653498541 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0218007105601 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246019314613 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0169092469032 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242291384565 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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