Do you think prisoner deserve right to vote?
It is irrefutable to say that every human being has right to cast their vote irrespective of their criminological status in a democratic nation. I am a believer of human right and I strongly believe not any law should hinder its citizen to vote. This essay will discuss the basic human right to cast vote , and deduce to a reasonable conclusion.
To begin with, in a democratic nation any person above 18 has right to select, elect, and support the leader. Voting is a necessity in a democratic nation,not only it encourages and selects the best person to guide the individuals but also nation. For instance, 2 percent of the citizen in America are in parole or facing some sort of prisonment, and when it comes to voting it is colossal people and they have right to suport their leader.
Prisoners are also the citizen of nation, so abiding them in the voting process is not legal. Moreover, legislation should not hinder its citizen from the basic right of voting. A democratic nation sustains and survive when all its citizen irrespective of caste or criminal status are allowed to select the governing leader, thus reprucussion of it will only lead to a developed and prosperous nation.
To recapitulate, a democratic nation should not discriminate between its citizen and being a prisoner doesnot make him less of a citizen of his own country and he have equal right like any other people of the nation. So a law abiding citizen should be allowed be vote even they are prisoner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: , not
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Suggestion:
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, thus, for instance, sort of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7984496124 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7441933856 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.278368484 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.545454545 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160650041466 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789128524563 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377401416598 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111516430063 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327679377532 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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