Many universities offer degree courses for popular cultures such as music leisure pursuits and video games . Do you think it is important?
An increasing trend in today's world is the emergence of the argument that courses offered by the universities are of worth value or not. This essay will discuss the both sides of the picture concerned with the notion that degree courses for popular culture and leisure pursuits are of important concern, using a practical approach.
At the outset, there are several arguments in favor of my stance, the most significant one includes not only the betterment of the society but also the growth of every individual on the planet. Thanks to the benefits offered by the universities, one can not only attain greater success and effectiveness but can also enhance his capability and efficiency with greater ease. Other factors impacted by popular culture study in universities are discipline, leisure, and entertainment.
Furthermore, peace of mind, inner-satisfaction, and relaxation can also be taken into account. Moreover, in a country where government work on the enjoyment of their people are growing countries because there people have freedom and feeling of satisfaction with their work. Activities and knowledge based on video games, music, and leisure pursuits help people to work honestly and enjoy their spare time in useful activities. That is why, many people are in favor of the above assertion, that degree courses for popular culture such as music, video games, and leisure pursuits are of utmost importance.
To conclude, from my perspective, the government of Australia is taking great initiative in educating its citizens against the negative impacts of not having leisure time. Citizens are being encouraged to adhere to applicable laws and regulations to bring prosperity, efficiency, productivity, and development of country.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, honestly, if, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41911764706 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99945929383 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8314258151 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28790184443 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987351535717 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127481046783 0.071462118173 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144578322717 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103278225762 0.0609392437508 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, honestly, if, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41911764706 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99945929383 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8314258151 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28790184443 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987351535717 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127481046783 0.071462118173 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144578322717 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103278225762 0.0609392437508 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.