Do you think students who go to university should pay full fee than who do not go to university given that graduates earn higher salaries Agree or disagree

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Do you think students who go to university should pay full fee than who do not go to university given that graduates earn higher salaries. Agree or disagree.

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that students should pay full fee because after their studies they will earn higher salaries. There is a widespread worry that it would only lead to myriad of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.

To commence with, there is a deluge number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that owing to pay full fee, students and parents will get extra financial burden as scholars are not earning at that time. Futhermore, parents will not allow the students to choose the course of their own choice due to less money and this situation can seriously be harmful for talented pupils who want to pursue their career as a lawyer, musician and many more. Needless to say, all these demerits have a far-reaching impact on innocents.

Another key justification upholding this notion is that parents can ask students to do part-time job with study and this would really depressed the students because they will not get time for their amusement, creativity and imagination. Another pivotal aspect that cannot be put on backburner is that it might increase unemployment and illiteracy rate in a country because of less educated work force and that is why government has to provide funds and aids which will increase the expenditure of government. Hence, it is apparent why numerous are against of paying full fee of university without any scholarship.

To conclude, having pondered over above stated, it is crystal clear that the demerits of paying full fee at a time are indeed too dire to negligible.

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Average: 8.3 (6 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97864768683 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74986054327 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4907380004 50.4703680194 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.181818182 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172129740646 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568944662633 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619965076506 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980428549759 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216947516244 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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