It is important to preserve the beautiful building of the past, even if it will be expensive to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it.

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It is important to preserve the beautiful building of the past, even if it will be expensive to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it.

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that it is important to protect the beautiful buildings of the past, even if it create extra expenditure. There is a widespread worry that it would only lead to myriad of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.

To commence with, there is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that thanks to historical buildings, people can get information about their vast and rich culture, heritage, religion and so on. Not only can former times structure yield knowledge about living style of kings and their languages, but it can also provide employment opportunities as management is required at these places, thus it helps in the development in the country. Needless to say, all these benefits stand nation in good stead when it comes to making them developed.

Another key justification upholding this notion is that these attracts numerous tourists along with foreigners and they will bring foreign currency which can enhance the economy of nation. Another pivotal aspect which cannot be put on back burner is that these buildings become the source of amusement and recreational activities like shooting of movies and picnic. Hence, it is apparent why various persons are in favor of constructions of old buildings.

In a crux,having pondered over above stated, it is crystal clear that the benefits of preserving the historical buildings are too great to ignore.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11417322835 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87252954778 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637795275591 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8547625846 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.090909091 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126407892307 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040796458147 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414359008012 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738352275913 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453193462824 0.0609392437508 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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