People argue whether it is hard work or luck that contributes to success. What is your opinion?
People argue whether it is hard work or luck that contributes to success. What is your opinion?
There is a quote that says, 'Luck can be defeated, but not Hard work'. Yes this quote very well connects with the topic where hard work is always essential for ones' success than Luck. Many inspirational stories and people are famous only because of hard-work but not of Luck. I opine that, success is always associated with hard-work and detailed are explained below.
To begin with, Hard work is closely knitted with many tiny things such as, continues learning, proper planning, dedication, time-management and mainly consistency. Success is always associated with these qualities but not merely a luck. For example, Edison's great invention of light came through several hard works, setbacks, failures and consistent effort throughout his discovery. He proudly said, 'I have learnt 10,000 different ways of not doing it' after his final great invention after several failed attempts.
On the other hand, Luck only plays a small role in any journey towards success. We heard only a very few achievers with only luck as a soul factor. Luck will not helps one in gaining learning, character building and experience as hard-work does with a person through his journey towards success.
To conclude, Hard-work is the main factor which contributes to success. We have heard people won through hard-work and luck but not with Luck alone. Hence the consistent effort really plays a key role and a salt of ones' success with a little or no luck in it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...where hard work is always essential for ones success than Luck. Many inspirational s...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...y because of hard-work but not of Luck. I opine that, success is always associate...
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Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...oughout his discovery. He proudly said, I have learnt 10,000 different ways of no...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean the base form of 'helps'?
...ly luck as a soul factor. Luck will not helps one in gaining learning, character buil...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'help'.
Suggestion: help
...ly luck as a soul factor. Luck will not helps one in gaining learning, character buil...
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Line 9, column 216, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...t really plays a key role and a salt of ones success with a little or no luck in it....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, really, so, well, for example, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02723735409 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57092757179 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568093385214 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1113187761 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.75 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462178727953 0.242375264174 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191915003 0.0925447433944 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177107583903 0.071462118173 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.376523188271 0.151781067708 248% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.323404078343 0.0609392437508 531% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...where hard work is always essential for ones success than Luck. Many inspirational s...
^^^^
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...y because of hard-work but not of Luck. I opine that, success is always associate...
^
Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...oughout his discovery. He proudly said, I have learnt 10,000 different ways of no...
^
Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean the base form of 'helps'?
...ly luck as a soul factor. Luck will not helps one in gaining learning, character buil...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'help'.
Suggestion: help
...ly luck as a soul factor. Luck will not helps one in gaining learning, character buil...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 216, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...t really plays a key role and a salt of ones success with a little or no luck in it....
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, really, so, well, for example, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02723735409 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57092757179 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568093385214 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1113187761 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.75 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462178727953 0.242375264174 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191915003 0.0925447433944 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177107583903 0.071462118173 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.376523188271 0.151781067708 248% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.323404078343 0.0609392437508 531% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.